A line edit is all about rhythm, clarity, and tone. It’s about ensuring that what you’ve written on the page is what you actually mean to say. It’s about the way your sentences flow and the music they create in the reader’s mind. In a line edit, I will:
• Identify problems including wordiness, ambiguity, weak verbs, the misuse or overuse of adjectives and adverbs, clichés, strained metaphors and similes, and logical inconsistencies.
• Correct (or suggest rewrites to) sentences, striving always to retain the work's meaning and voice.
• Return an electronic version of the manuscript with edits highlighted in tracked changes and comments and questions included in the margin.
A line edit inevitably includes some light copy editing, because while making improvements at the sentence level, I will also correct basic mechanical errors.